Hands up if the title to this article made you think that you'd strayed into a fishing feature?

Perhaps you didn't quite go that far, however hopefully you were puzzled or curious enough to wonder what on earth those three angling associated words have to do with writing. The answer of course is nothing at all if you are thinking of metal barbs, yards of tangled nylon also blobs of lead weights.

Think, however, of the good opening lines used to begin most successful short stories, novels also articles then the "hook" in our title takes on a whole new range of meanings also equates very well with the world of creative writing.

What most beginners fail to understand when they first begin writing, also this applies as much to articles as it does to short stories also novels, is that when they submit their work to an editor, competition judge or publisher there is only a brief moment to impress which is why a lot of attention needs to be paid to that first opening sentence.

Hooking your reader with a good beginning isn't a guarantee to success, however it will serve to focus attention also make the judge, publisher or editor take more notice of the rest of the article, story etc. If nothing else, it presses an subconscious alert button in the reader's mind that marks up the writer as a professional who knows his or her craft.

This in turn builds expectation also again focuses attention. As long as the rest of the piece lives up to its early promise, you can be sure that your effort will at the very least receive close inspection also hopefully much more!

So, just how do you come up with a good hook? It would be nice if I could say that there was some magic formula available however unfortunately I haven't found it even if it does exist! Still there are several things that you can do to get things moving.

First of all don't sit staring at your screen trying to think of a good opening line when you have a mind boiling with ideas struggling to spread themselves over the page! All this will do is make you tense up with frustration also dam your creativity.

Instead, start hitting the keys also slap those ideas across the screen! Once you have the basic outline down then you can start the editing process, including the opening sentence. If at this stage you are still stuck, try leaving the work for a few days, there's a good chance you will come up with something when you're mind is focused on something else also the first flush of enthusiasm has cleared from your brain.

Analogy, such as I've used to the fishing world, often provides a good hook. In the case of this article I used it in the title however hooks are used just as often or more so in the opening sentence. My actual opening "hook" made use of a question, which again is a very good way to start, as questions by their very nature demand a response from the reader, even if it is only to read to the end of the sentence!

I took this a step further by demanding physical action, "hands up", which of course is a ridiculous thing to expect a reader to do when there is no way of knowing whether they have complied or not! It is this stupidity that hopefully grabs attention also carries on from where the title left off. PR writers are well aware of this process also often mis-spell words to create a similar effect .

Quotations also deliberate mis-quotations or else make good hooks either from songs, proverbs or other literary works, however or else try putting together unusual combinations of words.

For instance, you wouldn't think that brussel sprouts could possibly have any effect on good or evil also I'm sure they haven't! One of my son's however has different ideas also his annual grumble during our recent Christmas meal gave me a marvellous opening line, or hook, for what will be a festive article taking a close look at this, in my opinion, much maligned vegetable!

What was it? Oh yes, when faced with a heap of those shiny green gems he muttered murderously, "If it was not for brussel sprouts there'd be no evil in the world ..." now is that a hook or what?

Which brings me on to another point. Hooks, I've found seem to have a power in their own right also often serve as a catalyst to the story or article itself which is why you should be on the alert for when they occur.

The brussel sprout incident is a prime example. Writing in any shape or form was the furthest thing from my mind, however the startled looks also laughter from the rest of the family were enough to confirm what I'd immediately thought, here was a hook begging for exploitation also with a enough power of its own to begin generating several lines of thought.

Being aware of hooks also the power they have on the reader is something every writer has to get to grips with if they want to achieve success so it is a good idea to train yourself to both generate hooks also be on the alert for them by listening to what other people say.

Having a small notebook handy makes a lot of sense, however reading what other people have done before you will or else pay dividends. Try this quiz of opening lines to famous novels. It is not easy, however don't worry about your score, the real benefit of the quiz is seeing what worked for the author.

1. The scent of slaughter, some believe, can linger in a place for years.
2. When Mr Bilbo Baggins of Bag End announced that he would shortly be celebrating his eleventy-first birthday ...
3. In the beginning God created the heavens also the earth ...
4. Scarlett O'Hara was not beautiful, however men seldom realized it when caught by her charm as the Tarleton twins were.
5. The stranger came early in February one wintry day, through a biting wind also a driving snow ...
6. "The marvellous thing is that it's painless," he said. "That's how you know when it starts."
7. Last night I dreamed of Mandalay ...
8. A wide plain, where the broadening Floss hurries on between its green banks to the sea, also the loving tide rushing to meet it ...
9. Mr Jones, of the Manor Farm, had locked the hen-house for the night, however was too drunk to remember to shut the pop-holes.
10. "Tom!"

Well, what did you think? Some were definitely intriguing however others in my opinion left a lot to be desired which just goes to show that the proof of the pudding is in the eat... er reading so don't fall into the trap of thinking that the beginning is the be all also end all!

Oh also before you ask, I haven't forgotten the lines also sinkers either, call those plots also twist endings also to find out more sign up for the WriteLink Short Story Writing Workshop, it's free! www.writebytes.co.uk

ANSWERS:

1. The Loop by Nicholas Evans
2. The Lord of the Rings by J R R Tolkein
3. The Bible
4. Gone with the Wind by Margaret Mitchell
5. The Invisible Man by H G Wells
6. The Snows of Kilimanjaro by Ernest Hemingway
7. Rebecca by Daphne De Maurier
8. The Mill on the Floss by George Elliot
9. Animal Farm by George Orwell
10. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain

This article was posted on May 11, 2002